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Outlining a personal statement from a project
Grades 9–12 · Ready-made original
Learning goal
Build a truthful outline from supplied project actions.
Write, draw, or say your answer. You may pass.
The example
A fictional student made a class map, noticed the start arrow was unclear, asked for feedback, and revised it. No award, hardship story, or admissions result is supplied.
A worked response
An outline can use Task: make a map; Action: ask for feedback and revise; Learning: clear directions need checking with a reader.
Your task
1. Write the three headings and add the supplied facts.
2. Draft one opening sentence about the class task.
3. Remove any achievement or personal history that is not in the story.
Space for your task
Questions
1. What was the class task?
2. What action did the student take after feedback?
3. What learning can be supported by the story?
4. What claims should not be added?