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Asking a teacher for clearer feedback
Grades 9–12 · Ready-made original
Learning goal
Ask for an example when feedback is too general to use.
Materials
The student page below and a pencil.
Opening question · 3 minutes
“What question would turn broad feedback into a useful next step?”
A school situation · 5 minutes
A fictional essay is returned with “Be clearer.” Nia cannot tell which sentence needs work or what a clearer version would include.
One possible response · 4 minutes
Nia asks, “Could you point to one sentence and show what detail it needs?” A specific example makes the next revision manageable.
Practice · 10 minutes
What question would turn broad feedback into a useful next step?
1. An essay comment says, “Explain more,” without naming a section.
2. A project comment says the evidence is unclear. The student does not know which claim it refers to.
Possible answers
1. “Could you point to one section and show what kind of explanation it needs?”
2. “Which claim should I focus on, and what would make its evidence clearer?”
Student page · 5 minutes
Use the ready-to-print student page at the end of this lesson. Students may write, draw, or give an answer aloud.
Exit question · 3 minutes
“Choose one of the stories. What could the student say or do first?”
Student page to print
Asking a teacher for clearer feedback
Write, draw, or say your answer. You may pass.
An example
A fictional essay is returned with “Be clearer.” Nia cannot tell which sentence needs work or what a clearer version would include.
What question would turn broad feedback into a useful next step?
One possible response: Nia asks, “Could you point to one sentence and show what detail it needs?” A specific example makes the next revision manageable.
1. An essay comment says, “Explain more,” without naming a section.
What question would turn broad feedback into a useful next step?
2. A project comment says the evidence is unclear. The student does not know which claim it refers to.
What question would turn broad feedback into a useful next step?
One sentence to keep
Choose one story above. Write the first thing the person could say or do.